Personally i was pleased with the story as a whole, pretty impressive how such a young (in relation to most writers) mind could come up with such a complex story-line and narration. is there anything you would change? if so, what would it be?? i personally would have ended it with an ending similar to that of The Pit and the Pendulum. where perhaps Victor wakes up and it all be a dream and have Elizabeth beside him and leave the reader wondering whether it WAS actually real or not... tell me what you think!